I love the drawing, coloring, shading etc of everything alone but together, especially with all the blue, it appears to be a bit cluttered and takes a bit of time to figure out that it isn't. Other than that it is wonderful! You've an extremely envious style~
My goodness you put a lot of work into coloring the pages! I think that it's beautiful! The only problem is that in the colored section, things can be a bit cluttered, especially on the bottom where I have difficulty differentiating the panels with what's happening in the background panel. But wonderful work!
It's a bit chaotic, hard for the eye to flow through easily. Very nice art tho, but it needs something to make the story more distinct, right now it seems a bit like a poster. It might be just too stuffed.